Review by Liz of Planet Print.
"Crime lives - and dies - in the deceptively picture-perfect town of Port Gamble (aka “Empty Coffin”), Washington. Evil lurks and strange things happen - and 15-year-olds Hayley and Taylor Ryan secretly use their wits and their telepathic “twin-sense” to uncover the truth about the town's victims and culprits.
Envy, the series debut, involves the mysterious death of the twins' old friend, Katelyn. Was it murder? Suicide? An accident? Hayley and Taylor are determined to find out - and as they investigate, they stumble upon a dark truth that is far more disturbing than they ever could have imagined." (from Goodreads)
After months of picking up this book, and putting it back down, I’ve finally finished it. Unfortunately, Envy wasn’t for me. The writing style made it very difficult for me to get into – too much description that I felt didn’t add much to the plot, too many sentences that were designed to leave you in suspense, but were so dramatic that it all felt unrealistic. Each chapter was meant to leave you hanging, but it was too obvious. I could tell that I was supposed to be left in suspense, if that makes sense. I knew I was meant to be wondering what was going to happen next, and because of that, I just felt completely removed from the book. I wasn’t left hanging, I wasn’t engrossed in the plot, and I felt there was more emphasis on trying to make the book really suspenseful and full of tension than there was on the story of the characters themselves. This in turn made the story feel a little jumbled – I wasn’t sure exactly what was going on, or who the focus of the story was meant to be.
The main characters, twins Hayley and Taylor, weren’t bad, but I just couldn’t connect to them. They were supposed to be very different in personality, but I felt like I wouldn’t really have known this if the narration hadn’t stated it outright. A lot of their actions and thoughts were never really explored, and we only really got to know them on a superficial level. Their psychic connection was also barely explained. I didn’t understand it at all, and I felt like it was just a convenient ability they had that let them solve mysteries. On top of that, I’m not sure teens reading this book would appreciate the way they’re portrayed in it. I’m a teen myself, but some of the abbreviations used in texting and messaging each other even stumped me. It actually took some effort to decipher what they were trying to say to each other! This view that teens only talk in acronyms and slang is a bit outdated. Most of us text or message each other in full words, with a few abbreviations here and there.
The story itself had potential – cyberbullying is a real issue in today’s world, and definitely needs to be addressed because it’s something that affects so many people’s lives. However, I found there were too many things going on. A lot seemed irrelevant to the plot and I was really confused at what I was supposed to be thinking. Random things were focused on with great detail, making it seem like they would be important later on in the book – then were never mentioned again! I found myself wondering why they were mentioned in the first place, and I was trying to work out which things were relevant to the story, and which things were just there for the sake of it. The overlong descriptions made the book drag and the impact of Kateyln’s (the girl who died) death was lessened because it was lost in all other the other stuff happening. I just wanted the story to pick one thing to centre on and go with it, without going off on tangents all over the place.
I have read other reviews for this book, and I realise that I may perhaps be in the minority, so I don’t want to completely deter people from reading this. I’ve always enjoyed mysteries and thrillers, but I’ve never really read true-crime, which is what the author is famous for writing, so maybe it’s my lack of experience with this genre and the author’s previous works that made the book unenjoyable. There were some good points – the way things were connected were quite clever and the main plot was quite intriguing (though some things were predictable), so if you enjoy very complicated books, crime novels or have read the author’s previous works, then perhaps give this one a go.
Overall, I was lured by Envy’s very creepy and intriguing cover, but was disappointed with the story inside. I’d recommend reading an extract of this book first before buying it to see whether you’d enjoy the writing style, as that was one of my main issues with it.
Review by Liz of Planet Print.
- Publisher: Splinter, June 2012
- ISBN-10: 1454901802
- ISBN-13: 978-1454901808













